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Writer's pictureMelissa Saulnier

Write This Novella Pt 5 Silent Night, Deadly Night

IV. Unveiling Secrets


A. As the investigation continues, secrets about the family start to emerge.

Detective Sullivan's relentless pursuit of the truth begins to bear fruit as he uncovers a web of secrets within the Hawthorne family. Hidden affairs, financial misdeeds, and long-held grudges come to light, painting a complex and intricate picture of the family dynamics. Each family member has their own skeletons in the closet, and as the detective delves deeper, the once-glamorous facade of the Hawthorne family begins to crumble.


B. The detective discovers that each family member had a reason to want the patriarch dead.

As the evidence mounts, Detective Sullivan uncovers a startling revelation: each family member had a motive to want Alexander Hawthorne dead. Olivia, the ambitious lawyer, had been embezzling funds from her father's company to fuel her extravagant lifestyle. William, the artist, had been overshadowed by his father's success and resented the pressure to conform to the family's expectations. Emily, the adventurous spirit, had been secretly plotting to sell the estate and use the proceeds to fund her globetrotting dreams. Even Victoria, the grieving widow, had been harboring resentment towards her husband for his infidelity and neglect.

The detective's findings send shockwaves through the family, as they come face to face with their own dark secrets and the realization that any one of them could be the culprit behind the crime.


C. Tensions rise among the family as accusations start to fly.

With the unveiling of these secrets, tensions within the family reach a boiling point. Accusations fly, tempers flare, and trust crumbles. Each family member becomes a suspect in the eyes of the others, and the once-close-knit Hawthorne family is torn apart by suspicion and betrayal.

As the accusations intensify, the detective must navigate the storm of emotions and conflicting testimonies to uncover the truth. The once-glamorous Hawthorne Manor becomes a battleground of emotions, as the family members confront their own guilt and grapple with the consequences of their actions.


As Act IV unfolds, the detective's investigation takes a dramatic turn, revealing the dark underbelly of the Hawthorne family. The once-united family is now fractured, and the search for the truth becomes a race against time to prevent further destruction. The unveiling of secrets brings the investigation to a critical juncture, where the detective must separate fact from fiction and find the elusive answer to the question: who is responsible for the death of Alexander Hawthorne?


V. Climax


  A. A major clue or revelation shifts the direction of the investigation.


  B. The detective confronts the family with this new information.


  C. The true killer is revealed.



Melissa Saulnier


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